When I looked into the future
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Hi there! I'm Manas and this is "When I looked into the future". For now, I don't have much details for the story because I have just started writing and have completed part one, but I would keep updating things as the story proceeds.
It is a fictional story, of course, and the main lead characters are a teenager named "Raven" and his Grandfather, "John". The secondary leads include Raven's best friend, Spencer.
Backstory - Raven was seven years old, when his parents left him, and after that, he has been living with his grandparents. Sadly, her grandmother died after five years of him being with them. Therefore we can understand how mentally weak poor Raven is.
Hope you like it! Thankyou!
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