Fredbear's Family Diner (Chapter 2)

I wanted to retell the story of William Afton in a way that makes sense, and I want to improve my writing skills, and well, I like Five Nights At Freddy's and it's story. Trying to understand what is going on is a different story. I just wanted to make a way for that story to be understood. If you have an criticism at all do not hesitate to tell me because i do want to hear it. I would rather hear criticism than anything else. With that said please enjoy this, I've had fun making it.