Hitting on 16; A Rewrite
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Ongoing15m
Last published Tue, Apr 19, 2022
just a little rewrite of wilburs work!
dialogue + story line will generally be the same, but if i wrote it
obviously, it wont be as glorious as the original work, but this is only for fun
if wilbur says he doesn't want anyone to rewrite his work, this will be taken down immediately!
wattpad for some reason deleted my description so i forgot when i started this,,,
started writing: march
stream 1, finished: 4-19-22
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