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Hitting on 16; A Rewrite

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dsmp dsmplore hittingon16 lasnevadas quackity rewrite wilbur wilbursoot

just a little rewrite of wilburs work!

dialogue + story line will generally be the same, but if i wrote it

obviously, it wont be as glorious as the original work, but this is only for fun

if wilbur says he doesn't want anyone to rewrite his work, this will be taken down immediately!

wattpad for some reason deleted my description so i forgot when i started this,,,
started writing: march 
stream 1, finished: 4-19-22All Rights Reserved

dsmp dsmplore hittingon16 lasnevadas quackity rewrite wilbur wilbursoot

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