An Immortal Love

An Immortal Love

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This is a story I began my sophomore year and left alone as well as my first free writing attempt, so I hope you enjoy A young man, upon turning 18, discovers he isn't exactly human. He is descended from a demon and a fallen angel turned human, thus he is immortal. Along with eternal life he has gained several powers and once every 200 years can turn another human immortal, not that most live to use it more than once. This ability, usually used on a great hero of the time, he accidentally stumbles upon when he made his fiancé immortal before meeting his mentor who would teach him to use his powers. This event constantly pains him because for an average human immortality can be a terrible thing, but it also allows him to keep his emotions, something most immortals lose. The beings that control most of this hidden world are jealous of his emotions and angered by his love turned immortal. (Prequel is very likely)I am currently drawing/improving the cover(debating using computer art)
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"Show daddy how much you love to get tied up and fucked so hard in that tight pussy of yours. Show daddy how much you love getting teased by his cock." I looked away from his face in shyness and a slap was immediately connected to my sensitive breast making me mewl. "That was a command and I like it to be pursued." He looked at me with a menacing smirk while I stammered out a reply. "B-but daddy I-ahh!" Another slap hit my sensitive skin but it was on my leaking paradise. "I didn't ask for a reply or for you to speak. Get on your knees and suck my cock, show daddy how much you love choking on his hot cum." His words were so dirty and sinful I'm wanted to look away but I know I'd get punished if I do. I needed to submit to him, even if his words about me are so disgraceful, belittling and shameless...It made excited, so much excitement I got from him... It's making me submit. I will, 'cause he's my daddy. I got on my knees and hesitantly look down at his long.. thing.. That I will now call a rod and slowly reached out for it. He is belittling me, calling me slut and shaming me so much.. But the feeling of being ashamed is so good when it comes from him. He wants me to show him how much I love it when he destroys my sensitive paradise. I will do as daddy commands. _teaser for the story to come. This is my first ever story. It will have its ups and downs, it won't be perfect but it'll be its best. Add my story to your library you can find it easier. Thanks for choosing this story see you in the ride.

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