Minds on Fire: Book I - The Revelation
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Last published Wed, Apr 27, 2022
I wrote this small science-fantasy story for my English class.
The story follows Avizina, a reluctant young woman, as she still deals with trauma from her childhood with the Red Sect. She ends up being dragged into a galactic-wide rebellion to stop Pope Comosicus, by the mysterious lady S., who also claims can help Avizina remember her past lives.
The threat is imminent. The galaxy is thinning. Will Avizina be their last hope?
Story tags and inspo: space-opera, past lives, science-fantasy...
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