Wonderlands Next Generation

Hi! So this probably is not going to be any good whatsoever as I am just starting out as a writer but I was hoping I could give tidbits (And probably the whole story as I continue to write it) to you all and maybe you could critique and help me improve it? This story is one of my daydreams that I first had when I was 11. It has grown and evolved over the years and has gotten me through some stuff. I was hoping that someday, when its ready, I could publish it and show it to the world no matter if people don't like it. Some will and some won't, that's how all stories are. And if you would like to ask questions I would love to answer them! These characters have a very special place in my heart and I hope you grow to love them as much as I do. I have many more stories that I would love to give you guys with different people but this was the first out of all of them.