The Unkept Promises : Unedited / raw writing
RicardoDebrosse
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  • Reads 2,905
  • Votes 385
  • Parts 48
  • Time 4h 14m
RicardoDebrosse
Ongoing, First published Apr 16, 2022
Mature
badluckcharacterdelopmentcomingofageflashbackfriendshiplifechangingromancesummersurpriseunpredictable
"Trapped in a near-death moment, I relived the past as his life flashed before his eyes." 

 

This story follows Carter, a young boy whose life has been changed by a childhood story, as he embarks on a journey into adulthood. A journey of friendships and relationships, both platonic and passionate love, and betrayal. This story will bring back old memories like never before: a story that will take you on a nostalgic rollercoaster ride through the time when you were approaching adulthood. This is the story of Carter. 



#4 in Growingup 4-20-2022
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#23 in Unpredictable 07-20-22
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Seducing My Homophobic Friends

20 parts Complete Mature

Carter's world is about to change. He is moving way from his hometown and all of the friends that he grew up with. However, there is something about him that his friends don't know... Carter is bisexual. He's endured years of homophobic comments from all of his friends so as a parting gift to them, he has decided to try to shift their perspectives a bit by trying to have a gay experience with each and every one of them.

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