a Colombian soldier in konosuba

hello english speaking people

this is my first story translated from my english

The English that I use is the one taught to me in my private school here in Colombia, so I want to see how well I am at producing and creating some stories in this universal language.

sinopsis of the history : It is the year 1964 in Colombia, a soldier dies on the line of the battlefield in an operation to prevent the country's rebellious and independent republics from forming, but he dies and is received in limbo by a goddess who will send him to save a world from the clutches of the demon king but what he finds there will be much worse

( Note : i gona use the google translator or another translator when i don't understand someting , I hope that doesn't bother you in any way )