Percy Jackson: A Redo

This story is not 100% mine. I've adopted it from @callumvesper (I don't know if me putting their @ worked), who wrote the prologue and chapters 1-23. I also won't be changing anything major that Callum Vesper had in the chapters they wrote, I will only add chapter 24 and on, unless there is a grammar mistake or something that I feel I need to fix or add detail (something like that). And, of course, most characters belong to Rick Riordan from his Percy Jackson and the Olympians series or Heroes of Olympus series.
Link to the original: https://www.wattpad.com/story/296571980-percy-jackson-a-redo-abandoned
Callum Vesper's description of the story:
What if Percy Jackson was given a chance to do everything again. Well that chance has come in the form of the two primordials Ananke and Chronos. What will Percy do and what will he change? Find out in this book.

My description:
The wars have ended, not with the best endings. Percy, heartbroken, is offered a chance to try again by Ananke and Chronos. Percy's new start gives him a new insight on himself that he never expected. What happens when, thanks to his redo and the way it was planned, the redo just... ends. He'll start over, again and again, until he can get it right, right? Wrong, he has one more try, he can't ruin it.