This is a project for my English class, and I thought it was pretty decent. I worked rly hard writing these and I hope it's a good mini story. Like I said, it's a mini story. The chapters are kinda short and there's only 6 chapters but I would like some constructive criticism so if you have any, dm me on twitter @LyviahLS Anyways, here's what the story is about: Max was wondering by a pond by her house when she found a mask. She grabbed the mask and put it in her face. She then realized once it was on her face, a cloud appeared above her head. Later that same day, she was up in her room, when she saw her brother talking to someone in a van. Max started running down the stairs to stop him, but it was too late... keep reading to find out.