Down With The System
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Last published Fri, May 6, 2022
In the Sanctuary of Perditae, everything is perfect. At least that is what the government wants you to think. Truth is, living is more deadly than it should be. Livilla knows this more than anyone. Her story starts when she receives a much anticipated letter saying that she has been selected to breed with a "flawless" man to maintain the population. However, she does not want her future to be decided for her. She especially does not want a child either. She sets a plan to end the government's corrupt ways, but can she do it?
I'm still coming up with the story as I go, so please bare with me. I will be reading comments to get a feel of what ya'll may want and also to help me progress the story. This will be my first story and I want to try to complete it. I'll just have to see how it goes. Also, please note that this started back when I was in creative writing and this story started then and it will be the first chapter. (what I wrote then) I really want to know what ya'll will think of this so please let me know
I also plan on creating my own drawing for the cover but if I don't this message will still be here and please know that, that means the image does not belong to me. The story, however, does.
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