An Echo In Time
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  • Parts 30
  • Time 6h 50m
  • Reads 91
  • Votes 3
  • Parts 30
  • Time 6h 50m
Ongoing, First published Apr 24, 2022
At first Luciana had been set on turning around on her heels and leaving immediately again. But something about the way he was sitting alone on those stairs had made her stop in her tracks, leading her to approach him instead. She took in a sharp breath when she saw the expression on his face. Over the years she had seen all kinds of emotions on the God of Mischief's face - sadness, happiness, anger, annoyance etc.. But not once had Luciana ever seen the kind of devastation that he currently displayed. His eyes were completely blank, staring at the empty space in front of him. Not a hint of the mischievous spark that normally shined in them. He just stared ahead, completely detached from his environment. As if he was completely... broken.
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This is basically a retelling of the movies with my OC inserted in the story. It generally follows the canon flow, but obviously there will be differences. It's also completely self-indulgent, cringe and most likely OOC.
I originally just intended to write some random scenes but somewhere along the way I escalated, so this keeps on getting longer with every movie. Also I don't own shit, except my OC.

In case someone is curious, here's a quick profile of Luciana~

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TqqLkdcU62O28qiUJYIiK1NC_52oqvDpka9lnpo5J9k/edit?usp=sharing
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