Surrendering Completely
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"I blush hard seeing me in this piece of cloth. But I'm not the only one here seeing myself wrapped in satin. I feel Sameer's presence in the room. I feel his gaze on me. The word 'naked' is ringing in my ears. I imagine him pulling the string of neckline of the nightie, the same way he did on that mannequin. I imagine him taking the robe off me by pulling the knot.
My heart is pacing at a bullet speed, goosebumps all over me and wetness down there. I'm already losing it. I take it off quickly and change to my frock again. Throwing the nightie in the cupboard, I shut the door hastily and while leaning on the door, I breathe for my life.
I guess I'm finally ready... I'm ready for tonight... our 'special' night..."
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For a naive girl like Naina, who comes from a conservative family, the world of physical intimacy was completely unknown and obscure. Even when the love of her life Sameer entered her life, this particular part was still undiscovered. But things changed when they got married.
Come, let's see how Naina and Sameer explore the multiple stations of bliss, en route to the paradise of togetherness.
Will Naina surrender herself completely eventually?
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