Liam
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"Please don't go Nigel!" "I'm going to show all of you that I'm not weak!" "Hey, hey! Wait! Who are you?!" "Oh, guess you caught me..." . . . . . . . . . . . . The story first takes place in Nigel's point of view. The Goldy pond resistance is having a group meeting and Oliver needs someone to complete a mission. Nigel volunteers, but everyone is worried about him because Zack always takes on the missions. They're worried about him getting hurt, but he takes that the wrong way and thinks they're calling him weak... Then it switches to the Narrator's point of view where he's running through the forest from a wild demon. Someone saves him, but it's someone's he's never met before. The person who saves Nigel then tells him to catch him if he can... Hello, this is my first story! It's The Promised Neverland ft. an OC of mine. Please feel free to criticize my writing, I need feedback and help on how to write better. It would be appreciated. Of course, you don't have to though, and please do tell me if you like my story. The Promised Neverland and the characters in it do NOT belong to me, but Liam does. Liam is my made-up character. Alice, Aaron, Michael, Rin and Leo are also mine.
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