Cookies & Goodbyes

Two years after Anna's mum died, she's living with her brother Peter and her dad. After a tough goodbye, Anna never thought she'd be saying another goodbye to someone so close to her.
Hey guys, I thought I'd share a short story I wrote for my English homework. Our task was to create a story with an opening line given from a list. From there we could then write about anything. It was meant to be 400 words, sort of turned into just over 500. Let me know what you think of it and sorry it's a tad depressing!