Song Of My Sweetheart

I want to rewrite the old story to see how much I can change and make it less cringy lmao pls ingore how bad I write I am still a beginner and do this as a hobby and don't really know how to write. (Also it goes from she to I so just a heads up I am already to late to change it but this is just a warning) (Mandy X Vincent [Rewrite])