The RedTide: Bloody Bones

After two weeks of sailing on board a pirate ship, Bella finds herself on The Redtide, with a mysterious heading that is unknown to her. After making an odd friend or foe, maybe something else(?), type relationship with the captain, she finally gets him to tell her where they are headed and why. But is it the answer she is really looking for? Maybe we'll in the novel(?)

Tell me if you want to see the full story behind this! This a short from a larger novel I'm working on. Trying to see if this is a good writing style for me.