I'm not your girl
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Última publicación sáb, feb 14, 2015
This is not going to be the typical bad boy story where the good girl falls for the bad boy although it will be similar, I have a plot twist which is the main point of the story that will come later on. This is my first chapter and I know it’s not great but I hope to better my writing as the story goes on and I hope this is a good start, I would appreciate feedback on how to make this better, constructive criticism is much appreciated.
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