I'm not your girl
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This is not going to be the typical bad boy story where the good girl falls for the bad boy although it will be similar, I have a plot twist which is the main point of the story that will come later on. This is my first chapter and I know it’s not great but I hope to better my writing as the story goes on and I hope this is a good start, I would appreciate feedback on how to make this better, constructive criticism is much appreciated.
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