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بات انکہی
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Complete, First published May 14, 2022
Sometimes to move forward in life, you need to go back... 

One call from Pakistan  has Behzad packing his bag and getting the first flight to home. Bestie has died. He's got to go home to face his past . . . which includes the girl he left behind , who hates his guts and never tries to hide that.. 

Mehr worked hard to get over her past traumas and even harder to forget Behzad's existence- which wasn't easy at all. Considering everyone kept reminding her of him . Being  the hometown's golden boy,   every talk  were about him, especially with her Mamo who was always full of him.

When Gnash said , "Friends can break your heart ! I always tried but never of you!" . It defiantely wasn't for Mehr-un-Nisa , who still haven't gotten over the lost friendship!

In order to respect her Mamo's last wishes, she's stuck with him- the co-beneficiary of her Mamo's will.  Ahsan Mamo- was a matchmaker through and through ! He decided that if he couldnt get them together when he was alive, he'd try to do it from the grave.....

The infuriating Behzad is hard to forget and harder to live with , and hardest to not falling in love with. From friends to , enemies to lover? The sequence doesn't seem right ! But nothing is ever right when Behzad is included ! 

Can the stupid 'will'  bring these two young petty people back together? Or will Mehr and Behzad continue to allow their pasts to deny them from the future they deserve together? 

Love is about second chances? Is it not?
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After Mehrunissa's, single mother, left her and her older brother at her fathers relatives house. she's faced nothing but ridicule and abuse. while her older brother was favoured. Once Mehru became an young adult, she had dreams. dreams that no girl in the village could achieve, not even her. she was isolated for most of her life, so she was innocent and naive. she was sent to public school, while her older brother and cousins, were sent to private school. When Mehru turned 23. her guardians didn't want to be responsible for her anymore, so they arranged an marriage for her, to the middle son of an rich and well off family. Life turns upside down, when he rejects her, saying that he loves another, and her guardians throw her over to his respectful older brother, Dr Fahad. who agrees to marry her. Dr Fahad is the opposite from his immature little brother. he's kind, compassionate, caring. everything that his younger bhai is not. She faces hate from her In Laws, but Dr Fahad, he helps her gain confidence, and helps her follow her dreams, but will she, even after all the hardships?