The Day She Fell

A rough draft that I've spent a while working on. Laina struggles through the events of her past as she helps the new object of a prophecy through his missions. Will the pressure of tracing her footsteps break her or finally let her move on?

Constructive criticism is welcome, but please do not comment on the plot unless it cleans up what is already there.

Warning: the first chapter is an absolute cringe fest, it gets better from there