Commander, Please Take This Seriously!
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Ongoing, First published May 16, 2022
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[ Attention to all Humans, Archangels had invaded your Territory. Please defend your Land until the War is Over. ]

[ Attention to all Humans...... ]

[ Attention to all Humans..... ]

While everyone was panicking, a strange Human was sipping on his limited black coffee and a cigarette in his hands, his face was stern face was cold beyond doubt.

"This coffee is a little bland. Change it." He said solemnly.

The Captain besides him didn't know what to do.

"Commander, Archangels is invading our Planet. What countermeasures shall we take?" Captain Song asked with a serious face.

The Commander stopped, he raised his eyebrows. "You serious?"

"Yes, I am." - Captain Song.

"Change my coffee first. Then we'll talk." - Commander

Captain Song: Σ(ಠ_ಠ)

"Commander, Please Take This Seriously!" - Captain Song snapped.

The Commander raised his eyebrow, displeased. "I'm taking this matter very solemnly."

"....."

"I'm calling Marshall Mo." - Captain Song.

The Commander immediately grabbed him, "No. No, don't call him! Alright, I'll take this very seriously, okay?! Just don't call him!"

"What about your coffee?"

"Life is more important than temporary pleasure." The Commander said solemnly.

And so, with machinations of the Commander who never took anything seriously had wiped out the entire army of Archangels in a matter of a day.
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17 parts Complete Mature

Completed⭐ " I'm an angel with a shotgun Fighting til' the wars won I don't care if heaven won't take me back I'll throw away my faith, babe, just to keep you safe Don't you know you're everything we have? And I, wanna live, not just survive, tonight." THE VESSEL OF THE DARKNESS A high school boy named Yuki seemed as normal as any other student. Little did he know, he was far from ordinary. One day, he stumbled upon a vial created by an angel, which contained Lucifer's spirit. Before he knew it, he encountered Callisto battling a demon. Facing imminent death, Yuki had no choice but to eat the veil, becoming a vessel for Lucifer. However, many secrets still remain hidden... •Upcoming chapters His training in the Angelic Defense Force Cluster 2 together with his friends that he met during the selection. Twilight_Shin/ Jillian P. Dionio Twinixxx_Moonlight Tiktok- https://www.tiktok.com/@tales_of_shivani?_t=8rZwBqyf2oh&_r=1 Fb- Tales of Shivani

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