The Backrooms: Gabriel's Story
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Last published Sun, Jul 17, 2022
All it took was one night. One night to change Gabriel Hernandez's life forever. After he slips and falls into a strange place that seems endless. Too many rooms and too many....things lurking. The only thing he can wonder is if he's ever going to get out and get back to his Abuela and surviving.
That one night also turned Santos life upside down. Since his best friend went missing under his watch all he could feel was guilt. It was as if he completely disappeared from the face of the earth. As time goes on the only thing he can wonder is, does he keep looking for Gabriel or does he give up and try to move on with his life?
This is a story that I wrote inspired by the internet folklore of The Backrooms by creepypasta. I'll try to stick to the info provided by the wiki of The Backrooms with a few of my own ideas sprinkled in. !!!Reader beware!! There will be explicit language and other scenes of violence and depections of horror. Hope you enjoy! Honest feedback is much appreciated!
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