It's In The Water
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  • Reads 1,771
  • Votes 24
  • Parts 39
  • Time 3h 35m
Complete, First published May 22, 2022
Mature
Thanks to E L James for your Fifty Shades Of Grey Trilogy and it's characters. In this version I want to have Christian and Anastasia have no family at all. They were brilliant from birth. Foster parents didn't know how to handle kids with genius IQ's so they were constantly being moved around. They became emancipated as soon as they could. They got the high school diplomas early and earned money and saved every dime they could. 

Christian Grey 21


Anastasia Steele 18

Eamon Kavanagh 45
Enid Kavanagh 45
Ethan Kavanagh 21
Kate Kavanagh 18

Jason Taylor 32
Gail Taylor 28
Sophia Taylor 6
Andrew Taylor 4

Roz Bailey 20
Gwen Bailey 20
Hector Bailey 1

Thomas Sawyer 24

Roger Swan 26
Evan Swan 26
Christmas Swan 18

Dr Shawn Flynn 27
Sandra Flores 21 Flynn's slutty girlfriend 
Debra Flynn ex wife 25
Conner Flynn 6
David Flynn 4
Cora Flynn 2

Carrick Sullivan 41
Grace Sullivan 40
Elliott Sullivan 23
Mia Sullivan 18


Every time Christian looks around his office pregnant women keep popping up. He thinks the water fountain they gossip around might have something to do with it lol. Roz finally got him to put a day care center in on the first floor. 
Anastasia is working hard to get her college degree and is close to getting it. One month more. She is working as a chef at a place called the Mile High Club as a chef. We just got news that the place might be sold to some young hotshot billionaire and there will be changes made. Mia is frantic because she needs this job to get into culinary school. So her nerves are getting the better of her. Anastasia tells her to calm down because nothing is set in stone and she has been given job offers all over Washington State. 
Things don't go smoothly in the transition of the restaurant. Anastasia leads a walk out which leaves a sour taste in the new buyers mouth.
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