||Torn, Taken, Rebuilt || a short mystery story by yinandyuh

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Poor little Riley, life was already shitty enough for her. She was falling apart piece by piece, everyday she was disappearing bit by bit. 

Her bestie friend Denice suggests she tries to go out and have fun. 

Who would've thought trying to have a "me day" would be one of the last times her family would see her?

 Who would've thought this would end up traumatizing the poor little girl?. Should she have stayed? 

Who's the bitch behind the screen?
Who's causing all this mess? And, why her?



"A little bit naive, a little bit worthless, a little bit weak, but definitely a disappointment. Show me you're worth it and you'll be okay, got it sweetie?"


I DO NOT OWN THE COVER, ALL CREDITS TO THE OWNER

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💕gonna try an update as much as I can plz bare with me💕

✨my first story so I hope you like it!✨

👻read at your own risk, this story will contain violence, swear words, plot twists, and a lot of abnormal things👻

🍵everything is completely made up, everything I'm writing is fiction🍵All Rights Reserved

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When Jane Madarang's neighbor Natalie kills herself and leaves behind cryptic instructions, it's up to Jane and her classmates to unearth deadly secrets. ***** Natalie Driscoll is dead. She threw herself out a window and left her neighbor Jane to unravel their town's darkest secrets. Following Natalie's instructions leads Jane to three other high school students who all have something to hide. The four of them must carry out Natalie's final errand while solving the mysteries written in her diary. But the secrets they unearth may be far more dangerous than what they ever imagined. Content and/or trigger warning: This story contains scenes of suicide, violence and murder that may be triggering for some readers. [[word count: 100,000-150,000 words]]

Natalie's Diary

When Jane Madarang's neighbor Natalie kills herself and leaves behind cryptic instructions, it's up to Jane and her classmates to unearth deadly secrets. ***** Natalie Driscoll is dead. She threw herself out a window and left her neighbor Jane to unravel their town's darkest secrets. Following Natalie's instructions leads Jane to three other high school students who all have something to hide. The four of them must carry out Natalie's final errand while solving the mysteries written in her diary. But the secrets they unearth may be far more dangerous than what they ever imagined. Content and/or trigger warning: This story contains scenes of suicide, violence and murder that may be triggering for some readers. [[word count: 100,000-150,000 words]]

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