Ikorian

Hey! im writing a story (just for fun) - surrounding in a universe of creatures and monsters - Im probably only going to upload my full story or once after a while after a write 5 chapters or so. Please, im in deep need of some writing advice, I have problems putting everything i thinking onto "paper" and make it coherent. Thanks !~
I still have not explained the "rules" of this story/how things worth so it wont make much sense for now, just keep in mind this is kind of a mish mash inspiration of : Stars Wars, Avatar, and a lil bit of like "Gotham" and some aspects of "Maze Runner "+ "Dune + "creatures of sonaria (I onyl like the the names haha) "!!:) thankss