Gives you hell
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Last published Thu, Jan 22, 2015
Jasper Mackental was expecting another boring year in which it turned out to be for the most part, until he met Avalon. Only problem is he never saw this girl in their small town in Minnesota and around those parts everyone knew everyone. When he starts digging into the past of this town a young girls story comes up as murdered in 1918 by her father strangely fitting her description..is this a coincidence or is he seeing a ghost. Things get even weirder when people swear they can't see her and he's losing it, is he truely seeing things or are they all just blind to the obvious
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