Deadly-Sweet
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Raymon433
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Hello!
       this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online.  I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better so they won't be that good for now.
      If you write poetry and can give feedback please do. Be harsh! I really want to improve my future pieces/ideas. c:  

About this poem: 
Past traumatic event that felt like the right thing for you at the time. Being so unaware that it's bad/unhealthy for you mentally. But later protecting those memories because they are what make you who you are. 

What I would like you to know: I don't care how anyone sees my poems. If it means something different to you that's okay! Take it how you will :)
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