Christian's Perfect Submissive
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  • Reads 11,059
  • Votes 307
  • Parts 28
  • Time 6h 41m
Complete, First published Jun 03, 2022
Mature
Anastasia Steele is a struggling musician, barely getting by as a waitress. After receiving an eviction notice her best friend Hannah came to her rescue informing her of a paid internship program that Grey's Enterprises was offering. 

Christian Grey is a ruthless take no prisoners businessman, only interested in relationships with women in the BDSM lifestyles. After meeting Miss Steele instead of hiring her as his intern he ask her to enter into a contract to become his Submissive, hiring Katherine Kavanaugh as his intern instead.

Christian and Anastasia had more in common than they knew. They both begin there young years in broken abusive homes. They both struggled with nightmares and moving on from their past.

In this version Christian Grey is very dark and Anastasia will be his perfect submissive she will take all of the corporal punishment that he dishes out. She will bow and kneel at his feet, she would do everything that her contract tells her to do. But after being with him for almost 6-months she will leave to pursue her life dream in music more seriously and make it. At the same time naive to the scary, dark side that comes along in the lifestyle of the Rich and famous.

Christian will still be his stalking, obsessive, possessive self when it comes to her. He will realize his mistake of how he abused her and try to win her back. Will he get her back? You have to read to find out.

Anastasia on the other hand will also be dealing with the life of being a successful musician and having crazy obsessive fans and knowing that some are not to be trusted. That sometimes you can't be to friendly, or welcoming all fans are not good ones. 

This version Christian does not have a problem with being touched. Kate and Ana are not best friends.

So please read enjoy

⚠️AS ALL MY STORIES THIS IS VERY EXPLICIT

MOST CHARACTERS AND SOME OF THE STORY LINE ARE FROM THE AWARD WINNING EL JAMES MOST MUSIC INCLUDE FROM RIHANNA

Completed October 25, 2022
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