Elysium
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This is a story my friend and I made for ELA and it's set mainly in the VR game of Elysium because we couldn't write fantasy, we made this.
Since we co-wrote this we switched off chapters. I wrote Raven she wrote Dove. @asmi09521 and @violetmoonrxse were a big help in revising and editing so I owe them both a big thanks 😊.
This is also my first story so I hope you all enjoy and I would love constructive criticism!
Content Warnings:
-Swearing
-Implied abuse (emotional and physical)
-Description of in-game death
-Implied death threats (social media being bad for mental health in general)
-Unhealthy use of escapism
These are all I can think of, so tell me if I'm missing anything. (Btw, I tried to portray social media and online multiplayers accuratly so that's why that social media thing is there.)
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