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Last published Mon, Jun 6, 2022
One of my stories I wrote in creative writing!! It's just a draft, I'm not sure if I'll go back over it or not. This is just the story I like the most from what I wrote, I've already improved a bit since this.
Also this is a multiple perspective story. The person who's perspective its in is the title and each chapter is a new perspective.
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