Underneath
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Ongoing, First published Jun 17, 2022
"We see what we wish to." I say softly, but challengingly.

"And did you wish to see someone like me?" He attacks back, his face coming even nearer to mine. 

"I just wished for someone to see me." I say, my voice now no more than an uneven whisper. I'm barely breathing now and my eyes are no longer narrowed. He opens his mouth and then closes it. He swallows hard. His eyes are huge and deep and blue. If only he'd let me drown myself in them, I think. That way it would be in something other than silence.

"I see you." He says. And my world

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Rayne, seventeen-year-old senior at Lincoln High School, has always been alone. Well, for long enough that it feels like always, anyway. She has no friends, no social life, no anything, really. She's what one might call a wallflower, without the "flower." 

For years she's observed her peers, seen them as they've aged and grown up, blossoming or not, into who they will become as adults. But not one of them had ever seen Rayne. She was completely alone in the world, unnoticed, unseen, and unheard of. Quite frankly, she was invisible. That is.. until the new kid. 

He's not quite like the rest, there's something odd about him, something off. Maybe it's just the fact that he can see what no one else can, or rather, see the girl no one else cared enough to see. But theories aside, he has secrets of his own. 

However, his attention is the door that opens all others, and Rayne is thrust into the worlds of other people. And not all of them are good..

With the revelation that she can, in fact, be seen by others, Rayne begins to see inside herself. But what lies underneath scares her. Who is she, she wonders, and most direly, what will
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Soft Whispers (Princeton love story)

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Hurt her. I know better than to listen to the voices in my head. You know you want to. But sometimes.... It just gets hard to ignore them. Slap her. I try my hardest to contain myself. Kick her. I listen to the voices sometimes. I let my mind wander for one second.... And then.... Kill her! They're all in control. ___________________________________ Jacob has been hearing voices since he was fifteen. He had no clue as to why the voices suddenly appeared in his thoughts. He told his mother and in response she did nothing. He begged for help from her; he had questions that needed to be answered. He's now seventeen, and has been to therapist after therapist after therapist, and Jacob still has no answers. Just six months ago he found out that if the voices really try their hardest they can control him for a short or long period of time. He's gotten into a lot of trouble because of this. Jacob has been taken out of two schools; the first because he felt unsafe in his surroundings, the second because..... Well, I don't think you're ready to really know why yet. Jacob has learned to live with the voices in his head. He has finally seemed to understand that he will not be able to rid them from his mind. So what happens when Jacob finds interest in a girl, and she finds interest in him? He's never been in this type of situation before so he has no idea what to expect. Will the voices approve? If not, then what will happen? Will Jacob end up doing something that he will soon regret afterwards? Find out how loud voices, were once soft whispers. ***Copyright ForeverMindless247***