Jeremy Giraffe

This is a bedtime story I wrote when I was about eight. I think it's actually got potential reading it back now, as writing it when I was younger, I knew what appealed to children and the way things should be worded. I haven't even modified the wording at all, only corrected grammar and some of my eight-year-oldly atrocious spellings. If you have any younger siblings of about ages 2-5, please read this bedtime story to them and ask them if they enjoyed it, then leave me some feedback?
Thank you.