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gσℓ∂єи σℓ∂ ∂αуѕ
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Complete, First published Jun 23, 2022
"I really miss,
The old me,
The old you,
And the old us."

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~Theme
Reminiscence of the old me, the old you and the old us.

~Description
Breaking us into nostalgia, reminisces us how magical the world was then than it is now.

Being written in a first person narrative, it compels us, the readers, to lament the 'Childish' and 'Ignorant' version of ourselves and also urges 'Time' to transfigure us back to what we were earlier.

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                             Writing Technique

~ Rhyming Pattern
The second and fourth verse rhyme with each other in the first, second and third stanza. While in the fourth stanza, the second and third verse rhyme with each other.

~ Rhetorical Devices
• Adynaton
• Anaphora
• Imagery

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Poems

114 parts Ongoing

Full of poems that I've written, am writing, will write. Maybe mostly about life and others are deep stuff and more... Some are happy and some are sad/dark. Some poem(s) I wrote about or related to a book/movie.etc. Others I wrote as a story in poem form. *checked my old poems recently and GORE, HORROR, BLOOD ALERT for some of the poems near the beginning!! SO maybe best to read my poems from bottom to the top if you mind the stuff^^^ *I think the more recent poems are quite different from the older ones. Some poems you can interpret as you wish :) Hope you'll like the poems!!! Leave a vote if you want or comment your favourite lines or any thoughts about the poem :D Earliest poems date back from March 2018 P.S. sorry for misspelled words and lack of punctuations in the first few poems. And, if you think the poem is about you, do not ask me. Because I will neither admit nor deny ;) Achievements in my eyes(DD/MM/YYYY) 1.01K reads~15/07/2020 1.34K reads & 78 votes~17/052021 1.47K reads & 108 votes~09/072021 1.68K reads~03/032022 2.01K reads~15/112022 2.33K reads~25/07/2023 4.04K reads ~18/09/2025 (Thank you readers!)