Story cover for gσℓ∂єи σℓ∂ ∂αуѕ by ImHSarnam
gσℓ∂єи σℓ∂ ∂αуѕ
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Complete, First published Jun 23, 2022
"I really miss,
The old me,
The old you,
And the old us."

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~Theme
Reminiscence of the old me, the old you and the old us.

~Description
Breaking us into nostalgia, reminisces us how magical the world was then than it is now.

Being written in a first person narrative, it compels us, the readers, to lament the 'Childish' and 'Ignorant' version of ourselves and also urges 'Time' to transfigure us back to what we were earlier.

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                             Writing Technique

~ Rhyming Pattern
The second and fourth verse rhyme with each other in the first, second and third stanza. While in the fourth stanza, the second and third verse rhyme with each other.

~ Rhetorical Devices
• Adynaton
• Anaphora
• Imagery

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