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Beyond a Glance
This story is completely written from my imagination. It has nothing to do with real world and incidents. Any character, event, business, place, incidents are fictitious. Any resemblance to actual person, living or dead, everything that actual happens that might be coincidental. This book contains mature theme and violence and some sensitive topics that might be triggering. I'm in my improving stage so please ignore some mistakes. After 6,7 chapters this story become very interesting so stay tuned for upcoming chapters. Please follow for more updates vote and comments and so as you are already here so enjoy this story.
Alone At Last (UNEDITED)
PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION! Everyone likes being alone once an a while. That feeling of peace and all your problems drifting into space melting away, 16 year old Luke soon learns that being alone is not always a pleasant feeling. When he wishes to be left alone upon a wishing well he soon discovers being alone isn't such a nice feeling. As Lukes mind slips away from reality he's losing sanity. How much longer can he take this madness?? Is he doomed too forever be this way? Take a journey with Luke as you read the story "Alone At Last" as he struggles to survive. PREVIEW INTO BOOK: ... When I shut the door behind me I realized that no cars were driving out here either. They were all empty and abandoned. As I strolled by there were no people talking in the coffee shop windows. There were no people eating in restaurants. There were no sounds except my heavy breathing and the howling wind. "HELLOOOOOOOO" I shouted, "IS ANYONE HEREEEEE HELLOOOOO!!?" I continued to call out to no one in particular feeling a little agitated by the growing silence. That's when I heard it... The winds howling came to a stop. The world seemed to stop turning. Time itself came to a halt. Leaves caught in the breeze and remained motionless. That was until the wind came calling back to me, and in this it whispered one word that answered all my questions... Alone- ---------------~~~~~ Thank you for choosing to read my story I hope you like and enjoy it!!! Please note: I am not a professional writer and I am terrible at spelling so don't judge!!!! THIS IS THE UNEDITED VERSION! THE EDITED VERSION WILL BE POSTED SOON! WARNINGS: NOTE: BOOK INCLUDES: 1.) SWEARING - & HATEFUL WORDS 2.) BULLYING - 3.) SUICIDE & MAJOR CHARACTER DEATH (also incudes thoughts and mentions of it)- 4.) BLOOD & GORE (lightly graphic)- 5.) ABUSE- 6.) And other things like that Don't say I didn't warn you!!! DONT FORGET TO VOTE !!! <3Terminé
Atlantis Academy: The First Element
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Shattered
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One shots (Character X Fem.Reader)
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One mistake changes Hannah's life forever, exiling her from her realm and isolating her from the man who loves her. Now, Hannah must find a way to restore Ryan's memories and get them both back home before she loses everything forever. After threatening Ryan's father, the Ruler of the Realms, Hannah is transplanted into a new life in the Second Realm. Unable to get through to Ryan or to find her way back to her birth realm, Hannah enlists the help of Maizie, another banished soul who has some secrets of her own. Hannah knows that Ryan's father is abusing his power on the Third Realm and she intends to stop him, no matter the cost. Seeking out the Keepers of the Realms, Hannah and Maizie are drawn into a web of deception that leaves Hannah struggling to find the right path for herself and Ryan. Hannah's choices could save Ryan and the Third Realm but may leave her facing an uncertain future. What have people been saying about The Realms? *This book is awesome. I wish I could erase my memory of it and start it all over again - alubenlanretni *I loved this book - a3griffin32 *This is so amazing. You are truly talented - collettekozuchlepley *Love love loved this book! - shantelle721 *Loved the book! I was anxious to see what was coming next and was not disappointed when it did! - nicoleblakebontaine #5 in Adventure - January 26th, 2017 Third Place - 2016 Undiscovered Writers Awards in Adventure Featured story December 2016 - July 2017. Watty Awards Shortlist 2017 Cover by @pipo_here_
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