Rewrite of The River Territories

Rewrite of The River Territories

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In an alternate version of the Warriors world where more clans spilt off of the clans and left to a new territory. It's a world where the original four clans were never threatened by deforestation, and, instead, more clans split off and had to be forced out of the Forest territory. Not long before the story, there was a war in the center valley of River territories, leaving the losing side devastated in numbers, angry and defensive. Everything screeches to a halt when the magical statues that guard the island, the site of their worship, don't allow the medicine cats on the island. All the clans close themselves off from the others, even abandoning the full moon gatherings. However, there is hope. For a long time, the cats of the river territories have gained odd magical abilities, each with their own magic that they use to aid their clan. One medicine cat apprentice has seen a prophecy that if she can gather a cat or two from each clan, they can use their magic together to contact one of the deity spirits in control of the island and get them to fix whatever is causing the guardians to attack. There were a lot of problems with the original story, since it was my first book and a collaborative project with another person who forgot to create their characters. In this rewrite, I will change characters personalities and will give more time between the plot beats. Sorry if it seems to move a bit too slowly, or if it doesn't really make sense. I won't update too often, but i will eventually write an ending to this story.
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