Rewriting That Scene From TSITP
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how i would have written the pool scene in tsitp
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{Discontinued} I simply lost interest and began a brand new story, Summer Love. Ariana Conklin. The girl of Jeremiah's dreams. This summer was going to be better than ever. Espcially when she falls in love with her best friend Jeremiah. #16 in Fisher #6 in CousinsBeach #2 in Conklin #30 in BellyConklin #49 in belly #26 in tsitpComplete
𝙊𝙪𝙧 𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙢𝙚𝙧
𝙈𝙖𝙮𝙖 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙠𝙡𝙞𝙣 𝙝𝙖𝙨 𝙗𝙚𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙣 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙅𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙢𝙞𝙖𝙝 𝙁𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙗𝙚𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙠𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙨. 𝙎𝙝𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙨 𝙨𝙥𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙢𝙚𝙧 𝙖𝙩 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙨 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙅𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙢𝙞𝙖𝙝'𝙨 𝙛𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙮. 𝙏𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙢𝙚𝙧 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡𝙨 𝙖𝙨 𝙞𝙛 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙝𝙖𝙨 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙙, 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩? 𝙊𝙘 𝙭 𝙟𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙢𝙞𝙖𝙝 𝙛𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙚𝙧Complete
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this is what i thought should have happened instead of whatever tf book/season 2 was! this would be my dream in a perfect world where everyone actually communicated lmao. enjoy! feel free to leave comments :)☕️🍬❄️🎄
1 Step Forward and 3 Steps Back
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(𝗜𝗥•𝗜𝗦) 𝙍𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙗𝙤𝙬 • 𝙒𝙞𝙨𝙙𝙤𝙢 "ⁱᵗ'ˢ ᵃ ᵇᵃᵈ ʰᵃᵇⁱᵗ⁻ ʰᵉ'ˢ ᵗʰᵉ ᵇᵃᵈ ʰᵃᵇⁱᵗ" 𝐈𝐑𝐈𝐒 + 𝐉𝐄𝐑𝐄𝐌𝐈𝐀𝐇 𝐖𝐇𝐀𝐓 𝐊𝐄𝐄𝐏𝐒 𝐓𝐇𝐄𝐌 𝐀𝐏𝐀𝐑𝐓 ? 𝐓𝐀𝐘𝐋𝐎𝐑. 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐑𝐓𝐄𝐃:𝟎𝟐/𝟏𝟖/𝟐𝟑 𝐄𝐍𝐃𝐄𝐃:𝟎𝟎/𝟎𝟎/𝟎𝟎
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