Lucky Comet
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  • Parts 32
  • Time 3h 58m
  • Reads 197
  • Votes 34
  • Parts 32
  • Time 3h 58m
Complete, First published Jun 28, 2022
When Comet reluctantly accepts an offer to go to Eden Valley, he finds himself in a world of magic, secrecy and danger. He has to master the powers of fortune while protecting the valley and making friends along the way.

Author's Notes:

+This was my first attempt at long story/serial
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