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The Broken Mage
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Ongoing, First published Jun 28, 2022
Louis Star, a 17-year-old at Saint John Orphanage, gets a VR Pad for his birthday. Surprise ruled his mind. Well, that was until...

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"What the- Why am I naked?"
"Pff- What's wrong with your character Louis? Heart-styled undies? Ahahahaha!"
"Shut up Alex and help me find something to wear!"

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"Equip Novice Mage Robe."
[System: Unable to equip. Conditions to equip are unsatisfied.]
"Equip Novice Mage Boots"
[System: Unable to equip. Conditions to equip are unsatisfied.]
"What is wrong with this thing? Why won't it listen to me?"
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