Arsenic

Arsenic

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It is May of 1944, France remains in occupation under Nazi Germany during the Second World War due to the French surrender to Nazi Germany in 1940. Gretilde Blasius- codenamed KLARA, is the daughter of an agent's target and a member of the French Resistance. Along with a mute Secret Operations Executive agent codenamed DRYSTAN, they fight against the Nazis upon negotiation in Paris. In their defiance towards the oppressive regime, they are confronted with the apathetic horrors of war. -draft of my third novel Arsenic (edits in terms of dialogue or structure may be often); constructive criticism is appreciated -all art presented in this book is drawn by me started on 7.13.22 ended on 5.20.23
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Carol is dropped into the plot of her favourite crime novel as a tragic side character with the same name. The character who shared her name was an unfortunate cannon fodder who died to advance the plot and further, the protagonist's drive to solve the crime and avenge his junior officer who was murdered by the final boss. Carol was only mentioned briefly. Maybe a total of 5 lines were used to describe her. She was an intern at the station fresh out of the police academy at the ripe age of 19. She wasn't even aware of the main case that the plot revolved around. The only reason to explain her death was being at the wrong place at the wrong time, which caused her to bump directly into the main villain as he was escaping the protagonist's chase midway through the book. The villain took her hostage as he noted her badge and lack of protective equipment and then killed her when the protagonist tried to negotiate terms rather than simply accepting his demands. Although the villain pulled the trigger, Carol couldn't help cursing out the protagonist when she read this scene as she felt he was equally responsible for her death. Carol ended up finishing the book anyway and as she read the last chapter a sense of frustration overcame her and she left a 'strongly worded' comment for the author, cursing out the protagonist as stupid and irresponsible, she preached that there was no reason to have killed off a 19-year-old girl like Carol (from the book) the way they did and how if a person with common sense faced that situation the girl would have lived. So when Carol awoke in the young girl's body, she had a few thoughts: what the hell is happening? how do I avoid dying? can I speed up the plot to save more lives? Along the way, Carol discovers a surprising ability hidden in the cannon fodders DNA. She has a mystical ability to physically see when a person lies and the actual truth. I'll update as soon as the writers block leaves me be.

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