Upon the Flying Ship: Rewritten Records of the Illiterate Author
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  • Reads 63
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  • Parts 17
  • Time 2h 58m
Complete, First published Jul 07, 2022
Dear Readers
I'm planning to publish a book. And this is the draft #1 of the book I want to publish - so please help me out.
From to this my own experience: I have trouble noticing misunderstandable material, because I know what I WANTED to say (but didn't say it right). 
So please, help me out. I would love any comments about not-understandable material or just typos, no matter how mean they might sound to you, I want that feedback. 

The DSS has been around for a long time. People come and go, die and are born, but the ship floats above it all.
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