Forbidden Mistakes

Forbidden Mistakes

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Running as fast as I can trying to escape. If I take a break I know they’ll trample me. Yet here i am sitting a classroom with no physical movement. My eyes don’t waver from the teachers powerpoint. I need a A because without that grade what am I. I will become the girl colleges look at with distaste and the one teachers snicker about. But the worst the girl who disappointed her parents. Even with a 90% my father says that’s one point from a B. God forbidden for 16 year old making a mistake. A promise is meant to be kept you say but when it comes you endless disappointment. But I remain silent and stare at the teachers screen rushing to copy the notes. I’m trying to not disappoint but it gets harder everyday. I mean am only Jessica Black nothing special well at least not yet.  Heyy i’m trying out this new story. It’s going to be a romance and I’ll update as much as possible . Please read and leave comments, i’m new with this so I can handle advice. But don’t be a turd i’m still young and make mistakes and i think thats how i connect to my character. She’s a girl who trying to satisfy everyone leave her wants and needs behind. A guy will enter her life and teach their is a life outside of books so enjoy.
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Moving In

Blaze White is the New Girl at the Prep school in her mothers old home town. But her only goal for senior year is to keep a low profile, no friends, no parties and NO boys. Axel may be adored and worshipped by his peer-but he hates people, except 5. So when a beautiful but closed off girl suddenly enters his group. He is not welcoming of the mysterious beauty despite the pull they both feel. •••• WARNING: This was written many moons ago. I have decided to put it back up because of a large request from readers. However, I was a kid when I wrote this so take it with a grain of salt. *** Like a deer in head lights, I freeze and watch as the car comes towards me expecting to get hit. But to my surprise, the car swerves to the side slightly next to me and comes to a stop. I take a deep breath I didn't know I was holding at the driver's side door swings open and a very pissed off Axel steps out. "Thank god," I mumble and place my hands on my knees to catch my breath. "Blaze?" He says and I hate it. I hate how he says my name as if it's his. Like he knows it's the only thing I want to hear, him calling out to me, looking at me, focused to me. It's the first time in my life I wanted someone's attention so badly I didn't care how I got it. And that was too dangerous for me to hold onto. "Are you insane or some shit? I could have killed you!" He says and starts to walk towards me. I take a big breath and step back away from him, "s-stop! Axel," I stutter still panting. It's then he notices the blood on my hands and shirt. "Is that blood?" He asks staring at my shirt and I take another step back. "Stop, stay b-back," I try to say confidently but I can't even breath right. Realizing he won't listen I start to turn around planning to make a break for it. "Don't run from me Blaze it won't go well," he growls reading my thoughts causing me to freeze in my spot. "Do not ever think you can get away from me."

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