You Did Good
BrittanyMoore632
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  • Reads 20
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 16
  • Time 46m
BrittanyMoore632
Ongoing, First published Jul 15, 2022
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Seven years ago, two teenage girls were mistakenly kidnapped by a gang of thugs. They were taken to a remote location where, unfortunately, they met their untimely demise. 

Years later, and only the bravest of the stupid dare to spend the night in the Mortley Hill house. Hearing of its fame, amateur ghost hunter Benji brings along his best friend and his best friend's girlfriend, wanting to see whether or not the rumors of its haunting is true. 

But evil lurks within the halls of this abandoned house. The groundskeeper warned them. Their friends warned them. Even Renata, the girlfriend, is apprehensive to their adventures, but still, they take the dare. 

An evil spirit, a haunted past, and a few mind games await them, but what could possibly go wrong? It's only a house, after all.
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