Too Close To Comfort- MakaxSoul

Hi there! This is my first fanfiction I've ever written. I've been scratching at my brain for a while now, trying to make a decision on whether I should give this a go or not. In the end I jut hopped onto my bed with my laptop and decided to write. Criticism would be greatly appreciated, so leave some in the comments if you think anything needs to be improved on!~