The Wastelands

The Wastelands

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"What do I expect to find out here, why do I continue this doomed journey, I ran out of water twelve hours ago, everything on and within my body feels as if it may crumble and take flight on the wind."- The Wastelands This story began as a poem to describe that hopeless feeling we all have experienced. I hope someone reads this and actually enjoys it. Hopefully someone likes it enough to design a cover, I'd really appreciate that. I'd love to see what the Wastelands look like to the readers. Who knows I could mix it up, extend it, and come up with a different ending. Constructive feedback Please?!
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This is a novella I had to write for school and I would like some feed back. EXCERPT Pain is something I've become very accustomed to. Whether I like it or not. It sounds mental though, I know. My biggest fear is being alone, even though I already am. As I walk into the school I see them, my 'friends'. They're sitting in the quad all chatting to one another. I try to turn around before one sees me but I see one waving me over so I'm left with no choice but to go. "Hey guys" I greet them with a shaky voice. So if anyone has feedback for me or just wants to talk comment or message me anytime and I'll get back to you as soon an I can. Also I need a good book cover so if you send me one I'll use it but in the mean time I'll be looking for one.

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