Under Water
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Last published Sat, Jul 23, 2022
Eloise Thunders
There's nothing more that I like than feeling the water flow with me as I swim. Ok, I'm lying. There is something I slightly like more than swimming. Getting those love letters from my secret admirer. The feeling of having someone that notices you and really looks at you when you thought no one else can.
It's been 2 years since I first got those letters. At first, it freaks me out. Who wouldn't be? Those things may lead to obsession and then stalking. Anyways, my secret admirer is really careful. I've been late for many first periods just to catch him but, all I got is detention.
Phoenix Midnight
There's nothing more that I like than seeing her happy. Nothing more than seeing her smile as she read every letter and keep every little thing that comes with it. I'm thrilled every single time I watch her. I'm close to her, yet so far.
To be honest, the only thing I wanted is to go there and tell her that I'm her secret admirer. But, I can't. Why? She won't believe me. After a year of being on the sideline and watching her like a creep, I finally had the courage to make me the reason why she was smiling, even if I'm anonymous.
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