I'm a big fan of rewrites, rewriting stories to see new dynamics, possibilities and points of view of other characters. The other day I was talking to a friend and it occurred to me; what would DR1 be like if Sayaka was the main character? And well, at first I was writing it just for me and her but... I thought I'd post it here to share.
So... New victims, new killers, new interactions... This is a very short introduction chapter, the next one is going to be longer. I wanted to post every friday if posible, so weekly chapters.
- I haven't changed talents, or the story of the characters, or anything like that. The idea is to follow the game as it is, but with changes in what would happen.
- I will try to resemble the characters as much as possible when writing, I apologize if one of them doesn't come out right, I promise to try to practice as the story progresses. But I'll do my best to stay in character as much as posible.
- I've got Junko involved with everyone since the beginning. It's something I've been thinking about a lot, but there are some situations and ideas that I can only develop if she is present. My friend told me that if it was like that, I could also consider changing the mastermind but for now, I don't know. I will think about it in the future. For now, I'm going to leave her actions ambiguous, as if she's trying to help or just pushing everyone even harder to see how far they can go.
- I have tried not to focus on ships and more or less put the canon relationships, still, there is a couple that I like a lot and I have written very subtle flirtations between them. I don't know if you will realize between which two characters is. (Hint: It has nothing to do with Maizono).
- English is not my first language. So what I do is write everything in my language and later translate it. I've been very careful not to make any mistakes but, I don't know if I overlooked something. If that's the case, I'm sorry.
Nina García siempre ha soñado con volar. Después de años de esfuerzo y dedicación, logra graduarse como piloto y convertirse en primera oficial en una de las mejores aerolíneas de su país. Sin embargo, su sueño se convierte en pesadilla cuando conoce a la Capitán Alex, una mujer exigente y autoritaria que la pone a prueba desde el primer momento.
La tensión entre ellas es palpable, y su relación se vuelve cada vez más complicada. Alex ve a Nina como una piloto inexperta y demasiado joven, mientras que Nina considera a Alex una tirana que no sabe valorar el talento de sus colegas.
A medida que trabajan juntas, sus diferencias personales y profesionales se intensifican, pero también comienzan a surgir sentimientos que ninguna de las dos puede ignorar. Sin embargo, su relación está condenada desde el principio: las familias de ambas mujeres se oponen firmemente a la relación, y la política de la aerolínea prohíbe las relaciones entre colegas.
¿Podrán Nina y Alex superar sus diferencias y encontrar el amor en el cielo, o será su relación un accidente inevitable?