Submit Pt.2
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Last published Fri, Jan 20, 2023
Hello all,
I am going to preface this with a statement regarding credit where it's due. Illyria_12's book "Submit" has over 2 million views, with myself included. I wanted to add my own interpretation, not because of the cliff hanger she left us with a year ago, but because it brought me inspiration and courage to add my own ideas and creativity to her massively successful smut story. In order to read this you have to read hers first, as the beginning will be taking place where Illyria left off on chapter 37.
If Illyria_12 decides to continue with her story I will be forever grateful.
I have decided to change her OC character, appearance along with her name because 1, I don't have the right to it and 2. This is my own personalized version.
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