Submit Pt.2

Submit Pt.2

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Hello all, I am going to preface this with a statement regarding credit where it's due. Illyria_12's book "Submit" has over 2 million views, with myself included. I wanted to add my own interpretation, not because of the cliff hanger she left us with a year ago, but because it brought me inspiration and courage to add my own ideas and creativity to her massively successful smut story. In order to read this you have to read hers first, as the beginning will be taking place where Illyria left off on chapter 37. If Illyria_12 decides to continue with her story I will be forever grateful. I have decided to change her OC character, appearance along with her name because 1, I don't have the right to it and 2. This is my own personalized version.
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"I love you" she says and kisses my jaw tenderly. "I love you too baby" I reply stroking her still damp hair. We were sat in a dirty McDonald's car park. We could be sat in a fucking pile of trash and I wouldn't care. Because I would be with her. As long as I'm with her, nothing else matters. -------------------------------------------------------- After all he had known was anger and hatred she was like a breath of fresh air to him. With just one look into her mesmerizing chocolate eyes and one listen to her angelic voice he knew he was ruined. He despised this feeling. He felt helpless. No matter how much he tried to stay away he was drawn to her and he knew he was playing a very dangerous game. Leaving the pain of her past behind her she starts a fresh in a new town with her older brother. Meeting the towns bad boy was not on her agenda but every time she saw him she was intrigued. He was rude and had a terrible attitude, but his eyes didn't show anything but pain which is something she knew all too well. They are complete opposites but have one thing in common. They are both broken, maybe just maybe they could be the cure to each others pain. ⚠️ this story contains mentions of abuse and alcohol so if you are not comfortable with this please do not read my story.

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