Dark Experiments

Dark Experiments is the first book from the "Recalcitrance" trilogy.
I have worked hard, but i'm still not done. Even the chapters I posted will be edited.
This is my second book being written, so excuse any incorrect grammar or Spelling you find! I would also REALLY appreciate it if you'd leave feedback and comments!!
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This is the book description:
"I attempt to get up, and her helping hand helps me to do so. I then notice her clothes are bloody as well, her face is still beautiful, despite all the battle scars and red dye covering her face. Her hair is painted with red gore splatter, and so is the area around her eyes. Both of them, crimson red, yet seemingly so welcoming, so warm.
She looks away from me and we start walking forward, through the vast field, which is filled, completely with dead fallen foes, snow covering up the crimson smooth blood. We walk over the bodies, our feet not finding ground to step on, and we don't care.
Bones are crushed. We don't care.
Flesh being torn by every step we take. We don't care.
"I killed them", she whispers, as hot air escapes her mouth, forming a cloud as it leaves.
She has no expression, and I'm the same as her, unfocused. The two of us walking hand in hand, alone through the field.
"It's okay", i whisper.
"It's okay."