Autophobia Reborn Dream

His brother wasn't always a monster; that he is now shown to be. At the final stand against the parasite that possesses his once brother; he is mortally wounded, and his last sight is his brother collapsing the au. huh HUH he wakes up with his brother just after getting their vessels from the Tree of Feelings. Will he protect his brother and multiverse from the same fate? Or will he break free with the help of a deity in need of someone on the inside?

Please give constructive criticism; this is my first attempt at a book; any will be appreciated! :3 Have been lurking on this site for awhile, wanted to take a run at it.

Art not mine link to artist https://www.pinterest.com/pin/358880664066776395/?mt=login
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