The Elixir
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WpMetadataNoticeUltima pubblicazione dom, ott 16, 2022
I wrote this when I was 12 originally! I've made several major changes to it recently and am rewriting the story. I'd love some feedback! Fifteen years after his closest friend is lost at sea in search of The Elixir of life, Madison must set out to find it once again. Stripped of his title as captain and his respect from England, he is backed by the king, his cousin and friend. Terror and adventure await him and his group as they race against time and his malevolent half brother who wishes to exact revenge for familial injustice.
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My friend at school told me he was writing a book called this but didn't know what it was going to be about, so I said "why don't we both write a version of it and then compare them to see what we each did differently," so this is it! This story is about a man called max who dies in an accident and finds himself on a giant spaceship. Where a select few go to look eternally for the gem of thunder, and nobody has obtained it yet. This book is getting a rewrite! I am not satisfied with how it turned out, and it needs reworking for me to finish off the storyline.

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